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Self Portrait in the Style of Marc Chagall
by Molly
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Description:
This is a sketch of an idea for an assignment in art. Since Marc Chagall has lots of Russian acrobats and dancing I thought I would make a circus scene, from a dream. This project will be done in chalk pastels on black paper. The final size is 12x18 inches.
I drew a circus scene with a king observing from a throne overseeing the entertainment. I am the court jester on the right. You can only see the top of the king's crown on the left at the top of the chair. There is a crowd across the ring, but not much happening yet in the ring itself. In my sketch I want to add something happening in the ring, so my final picture will change the position of the king's chair, and me, to make larger space in between.
Feedback requested:
I would like help with the top of the crown, I want to change it, but am not sure how or what. Do I need to draw more of the king on the chair? I am going to add my face to the jester, and have done another sketch on black paper that I will cut out later. The final piece will be redrawn on different black papers that will be put together to make a chalk pastel collage. I would like help with what to put in the ring -like a Siberian tiger? What could the tiger be doing? I think I should raise the chandelier in the final version. I think that the boundaries of the ring, where the crowd is, curve downward, and meet the curve of the jester outfit. Do you think that the curve of the crowd is tipped downward too much? The wall in front of the crown with the zigzags, goes to a point, maybe too soon? Where can I end the crowd? How can I put more of Marc Chagall style into my self portrait? Thanks for your help.
Molly |
Dear Molly,
Marc Chagall is one of my favorite artists! I love his colors and floating objects, and his sense of movement. I can see where he has influenced your drawing. The sketch shows the throne with the crown showing above it, the jester on the side, the crowd, the chandelier, the other jester (in the upper right corner) and the ring. Chagall usually seems to have one or two central figures in the foreground that are central to composition. Your jester and the king's throne are central in yours. Will your jester "float?" If he will, you might think of tilting it a bit toward the center. You asked if more of the king's body should show in the chair. Make several photocopies of your sketch and try it. You may find that that would be a good idea. You might think about cutting out the different elements and placing them in different places and angles on a blank sheet. That would be a good way to test colors too. To make the crown look more realistic, I would try to find a picture of a crown and see what it looks like to give you ideas.
Since the jester and the throne are large and in the front, they might have more and brighter color while the ring and the crowd might be smaller, less distinct and softer in color.
In looking at Chagall pictures, I saw how his style changed over the years. If you look at his work from 1912-1920 you see more cubist forms; his later work (he lived to be nearly 100!) is quite different but you can always tell that it is a Chagall. A good website for seeing this is: http://www.artchive.com/artchive/ftptoc/chagall_ext.html
The pictures are listed by dates they were produced. You can click on the title to see the print. This could help you to see how you could make your jester more like Chagall.
You asked what to put in the ring--like maybe a tiger. I know Chagall has done some circus pictures and one that I found on the Internet showed a bareback rider on a horse, some acrobats, a person on a unicycle and a drummer. The crowd is just many faint circles for faces which was very effective. If you like a tiger in the center, maybe he has a ball and a trainer? This is all very exciting with lots going on. It will be fun to see the next step and what colors you choose. Pastel on black paper sounds very dramatic. I look forward to seeing more! Thank you for sharing it with us
Lowell, Mentor
It's very interesting Molly-and your questions are so involved -I cannot believe you are in elementary school. Good for you to be so into your artwork!
The composition of your drawing completely draws the viewer into the picture with the back of the throne, and the jester holding a face rattle, stopping in movement to look out, against the smaller seated figures in the background. I want to study the details to figure out what is going on? Where are they? What time period is this? If you change the position of all this, adding action in the ring (tigers are nice, some sitting and some jumping, maybe through even hoops of fire?) I agree, that the curve of your ringside may want to not be quite so pronounced in decreasing as it comes forward, as you suggested, keeping it nearly parallel.
Whatever you add between the king and the audience will need to be sized to fit into your perspective… bigger than the far away people, yet smaller than the king and jester. I don't necessarily think you have to move the chair so much to accommodate what's happening in the ring. It's up to you, but if you do, it will make THAT probably more important than the king is now. It would be easier to add activity in the ring obviously.
As to some ideas for your crown, I think the back view might show a crown in the shape of an oval like you have, adding some points all around. I am thinking here of a crown ala MacDonalds- yes? SO if you have someone sit in front of you with fake crown on, maybe a paper one, you could envision it easier. I like the idea of a crown which has jewels and is fancy, maybe like Miss America's tiara - big in the front and not so much in the back? With a more obvious crown, and possibly fancy patterns or textures on the throne, I think you can get away with not showing more of the king. Sometimes less is more!
Your collage proposal of different parts of your picture sounds intriguing. As to raising the chandelier in the final version, I don't mind it as is. If you observe Chagall's imagery, some things are out of scale, depending on the location in the picture, and possibly depending on their importance. The crowd ends nicely when the jester begins. And I like it between the king and the jester, thereby making them important being by the side of the picture and so BIG.
<<How can I put more of Marc Chagall style into my self portrait?>> Look at his pictures and perhaps select a painting of his you particularly like and use all the colors that he uses in yours might be one way. Selecting a pattern from one of his pictures and appropriating it for the throne might be interesting too.
Phew... don't get too worked up on too many details at some point too. Just go with it, and have fun and learn from it, and go on to the next one. There are always more pictures to create!
Candy, Mentor
Hello Molly,
You have a wonderful piece going.
When you look at pictures by Chagall, you will often see musical instruments, specifically the violin. The instrument represents a dance or music to life, something like a pied piper. If you play an instrument or are involved in an activity that utilizes a specific tool or machine like a sewing machine or a field hockey stick, consider including it.
The suggestion by Candy not to show the king is an interesting idea. You could make the crown larger; suggest robes cascading over the edge of the chair and show a bit of leg, maybe with distinctive shoes.
Finally concerning what to include in the center ring. Chagall uses animals in surreal ways, making them larger in scale than normal that interact with humans. Have you considered presenting a Vermont circus? Several Holsteins could be running around dressed like tigers with a coyote as a trainer, a deer on the trapeze or a bear as the master of ceremonies? Raccoons are natural pranksters, they could be clowns. Beavers?
I also like the placement of the chandelier. To gain more picture space, consider suggesting the chandelier with lines only, making it less bulbous so you can see the crowd through it.
Enjoy creating your circus. Ciao.
Kato, Mentor
Thank you for your helpful comments.
I have started working on the black paper version of my portrait, and started my face in chalk pastels today. I did this on another piece of black paper and glued it to the portrait and finished the rest in white pencil. I had to change where I was going to put some of the things- the jester's rattle did not fit at the top anymore, and there seems to be less room for the center entertainment area between the king and me as jester. I wanted to add an important item to my self portrait, the clarinet, because I play it. Ms. Brehm and I talked about it because we agreed that it doesn't look like it would fit into my hand. So I think that I want to have the king holding it and that you would see it just to the right of the throne/chair. That way you can tell that there is someone in the chair, maybe with a bit of a hand or arm holding the clarinet.
I think I need suggestions for the king's crown. Today I started to make the throne itself fancy, and then the kings crown fancy but they looked too confusing together so I erased it all.
So, I guess I could use some suggestions for the throne too?
Thank you!
Molly |
Dear Molly,
Great start on your jester. The face is very expressive and interesting. You ask about putting in a clarinet. By all means go for it! It will show what is important to you. Chagall might have floated it in the air (with a few music notes nearby?). Having the king hold it would work too, and, as you said, show that a person is sitting on the throne. Might he be presenting the clarinet to you? You also asked about the crown. I have attached several crown pictures from a Mardi Gras catalog. They show different types of crowns and may give you some ideas. I can see why you might get confused with crown and throne. Maybe that's not all bad--they are both symbols of royalty and may well be intertwined. Let the viewer sort it out--or not.
This is an exciting project. I hope you continue to show us your progress. Good luck!
Lowell, Mentor
Hi Molly,
Thank you for posting your revised version. I am in awe of the jester's face. It's extremely expressive and human. I think Lowell gave you a great idea when she mentioned that Chagall would have the clarinet floating somewhere. Have you seen that picture of his kiss to his fiancee? Love has a floating thing to it, and music too! Trust your instincts in art, things will come together in ways that you did not expect them to. Good luck with your great work and keep posting!
Graciela, Mentor
Thank you for your comments. I liked your comments and the crown picture. I have been working on getting the drawing finished so I can start with the pastels. I have put the king on the throne with a crown on his head. You can see his feet sticking out from under the throne. You can also see his hand on his lap. I have added the crowd in the background, and some stars that are hanging from the tent. I plan to put confetti in the air all around. I have also added to my jester's outfit. I still do not have many ideas about what to put in the middle for entertainment and I need help with that. Maybe a tiger? I want to know how to make this look more like Marc Chagall's paintings, more like a dream. I would like some suggestions about what to put in the center that would look like a dream.
Molly |
Hi Molly,
You are really working hard on this and it shows. One can easily see that a king is sitting on the throne with an ornate crown. The jester is leaning into the picture and we see all the details of the hat and robe. The face is expressive and the eyes seem focused off to the right--as in a daydream? I see the jester perhaps dreaming the background (king, crowd, arena). You mentioned wanting to put something in the arena-- maybe a tiger--and make it dreamlike. How about a leaping (floating?) tiger playing a clarinet? Or tossing stars in its paws? Whatever you decide to add should probably be small so as not to overpower the jester and the throne/king. On the other hand, what you have done so far is very strong and the picture is well balanced. There is a lot going on already and might be considered pretty well completed. What do you think?
This is an exciting work and I certainly look forward to the next installment!
Lowell, Mentor
Hi Molly,
This picture is really exciting and coming along! A tiger in the center is still an exciting focus for the center... you could use a photograph of one to assist if you sketch it in, Chagall might have had a stunt rider on his back playing a violin.
In your picture the dark background is highlighting your pastel in an exciting and dramatic way. The face of the jester and the expression resemble a dream like state with the eyes in a shifted focus... I like the size of your jester, making her what the viewer will see first.
You seem to work in an ambitious way, and unafraid to tackle difficult subjects for which I applaud you. In this picture you have a lot to cover. Just get it all down then you can go over areas with more pastel if necessary to heighten or soften.
I am looking forward to your next post. Have fun with this!
Candy, Mentor
Hi,
Thanks for your suggestions. I have added color to the throne and crown in my portrait. I also added the turquoise wall that surrounds the crowd. I have made the king wearing a red robe sitting on a violet throne. I have added the entertainment as a girl balancing on a tiger while juggling some purple and white balls.
I need suggestions about what to do just to the right of the puppet in my lap, all of this area is part of me but it doesn't look right. I am trying to decide what to do with the floor in the picture. If I leave it black, the clarinet, which is a black instrument, will not show up. What color would go with the floor and the clarinet?
Thanks.
Molly |
Hi Molly,
You are really working hard on this. Every revision shows more excitement.
The king is wonderfully colorful as he avidly watches the juggling girl on the back of the tiger. You ask about your right side--I would consider adding just a bit of the same brilliant stripes you have used above. What do you think? If you made the clarinet a little longer and outlined it in white (as you have done), you might not need to change the floor color. The black seems to tie it all together. What is your view? The light outlining you have used in your picture also gives it a unique character. This would seem to me pretty much finished, if you just added to the right of the jester and maybe made some tigery stripes on your tiger. You have done a terrific job on this picture, Molly. You should be very proud of your effort.
Lowell, Mentor
I'm finished!!!
Thank you for all you help and suggestions. I finished my pastel today! I added some floor color and jewels to the throne, and some white light reflecting off of my face, clothing, the tiger, the juggler and the king's crown.
My mom saw my work today and said that she will frame it!
Have a good summer. I really enjoyed working with you and with this project. I hope to participate next year and do more posting of my work for comments, I like it.
Molly |
Hi Molly,
WOW! Your finished picture is remarkable--what a change from the beginning. The white light strikingly accents different parts of the picture where so much is going on, and helps tie everything together splendidly. I can clearly see the clarinet, the dancing juggler, the king's crown and even the stripes on the tiger! The jewels on the throne are a great touch. The expressions on the faces capture the mood of the picture so well.
I'm glad your mom wants to frame the picture. If it were mine, I'd frame it too! You should be very proud of all the time, effort and creativity you've put into this. I can tell you enjoyed doing it, and I look forward to seeing more of your work, Molly. Keep drawing!
Lowell, Mentor
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